社會主義價值自從被提出之后,就被大家廣為傳頌和學習,不僅出現在學生的課本上,在街頭巷尾城市形象設計中都有體現,因為這是值得我們人人學習的!如果把社會主義價值放在高考英語作文中會如何考察呢?考生該從哪些角度和方面來展開描述社會主義價值觀呢?需要用到哪些詞匯和短語嗎?以下是小編為大家整理的高考英語作文寫作指導!
主題一 社會主義價值觀
【示例分析】
如何理解“成功”, 不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語(quotation), 按要求用英語寫一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. ”
—Sir Winston Churchill
內容要求:1. 你對該引語的理解;2. 你的相關經歷;3. 恰當的結尾。
注意:1. 短文開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數;
2. 文中不能出現考生的具體信息;
3. 詞數:80左右。
練考場審題
Step 1:審題 謀篇布局
人稱 | I |
時態(tài) | 一般現在時, 一般過去時 |
段落布局 | 開頭點題: 點明對引語的理解 主題段落:用事例解釋對這句話的理解 結尾:再次深化自己的觀點 |
Step 2:頭腦風暴 字字珠玉
(1)美詞:get discouraged, enthusiasm, consist in, worse still, be about to do. . . when. . . , succeed in
(2)佳句:
?、?So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.
?、?Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Step 3:斟酌詞句 妙筆生花
要點1:我激動, 決定試騎一下。
一般表達:I was excited and tried my hand at riding it.
句式升級:(so. . . that. . . 倒裝句)
我是如此激動以至于等不及要試騎一把了。
So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.
要點2:回顧過去, 我覺得如果我失去了信心, 就不能學會騎自行車。
一般表達:Looking back, I feel if I lost heart, I couldn’t learn to ride a bike.
句式升級(分詞作狀語, 虛擬語氣):
回顧過去, 我覺得如果我失去了信心, 就不能學會騎自行車。
Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Step 4:銜接過渡 斐然成篇
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Instead, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.
Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it.
【仿寫實踐】
假定你是李華, 現在某英文報社面向中學生征文, 題為“50年后的地球”, 請發(fā)揮你的想象力, 用英語寫一篇短文, 向該報社投稿。
注意:詞數80左右。
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【參考范文】
What will our earth be like after 50 years? I have some wonderful predictions.
The environment then will be much better than it is now. People can enjoy the blue sky, white clouds and fresh air. There will be less pollution. Trees and flowers can be seen here and there. The rivers will be cleaner as no factories pour waste into the rivers and lakes. As for people’s life, there will be great changes. First, people will lead a more comfortable life because robots will reach each family and help people do the housework. In addition, people can work at their own homes on the Internet. In this way, they will have more time to entertain themselves. The earth will become a more comfortable planet for people to live on 50 years later.
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